Better... +1 :D you're almost there... just practice!!
Good start, But even out the heat in the sky.... the lines aren't distrubed evenly... unpause and pause... heat up, and again multiple times, to get the heat to distribute evenly... try to get it to look a bit loke some of my heatart... Make it smooth and good to the eye...
UNEXPEXTED TO BE FP 0_0 SO I DONT CARE IF THIS IS DISLIKED