The Powder Toy

Heat art by Bf94387

Bf94387
Bf94387
11 / 3
17th Aug 2016
17th Sep 2016
This is of a sunset over mountains. Please leave tips so I can improve.
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Comments

  • sauronvador
    sauronvador     1st Sep 2016
    beautiful ! +1
  • sentinal-5
    sentinal-5     28th Aug 2016
    the only thing i can really think would help you is pointing out that the reflection of the sun in water is always direct;y between the real sun and the viewer. i.e. directly below the sun.
  • Bf94387
    Bf94387     20th Aug 2016
    Thanks guys, I'll look into all of your suggestions.
  • newguy321
    newguy321     17th Aug 2016
    Tips: Don't make your lines too thick (especially for the tree.)
  • Goldtom
    Goldtom     17th Aug 2016
    not the best art for fp.
  • docRoboRobert
    docRoboRobert     17th Aug 2016
    Nice! 1+ Palmtree looks weird.
  • NoVIcE
    NoVIcE     17th Aug 2016
    Its good, but if there is water, where is the sun reflection?