My first bomb save. Utilizes Thunder, Fireworks, and Deut. Thoughts?

Yeah, I was just messing around. I will probably try to make it much better once I am back at my house, I'm out of town currently.

I wanted to keep it within the guidelines for legitimate bombs I.E. No BOMB SING ANTI etc.

Yeah, like I said I was just messing around, I'll have a v.2 in a little.